Schmange, I downloaded your song a while ago, just didn't get to reply until now. Actually, it almost put me to sleep. HAHA. I mean that in a good way man. :) I really liked it, very nice atmosphere. I didn't download the first version with you singing just the one with the female vocal. In my opinion, the song is awesome but I would have put it in Eb instead of D. I think that might be what it is missing, the result will give the song more impression and in fact make it more mellower. D in fact is almost neutral between mellow and bright. So the song sort of sways back and forth throughout the song, and also D makes the song sound weak or "flat". Eb gives it a solid mellow impression and a stronger sense of what the song is trying to express. I actually put it in a pitch bender on Soundforge (transposed up) to check, and it made the guitar and vocals more prominant, while the bass and synth keep the mellow atmosphere. I really liked the result, and I suggest trying it. But then again it's your art and my opinion. Good job on the song and keep 'em coming.

[Edited by noticingthemistake on 03-17-2003 at 04:43 PM]