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Oratorium
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Oratorium
New Member
Joined: 12/02/02
Posts: 15
12/23/2002 5:12 am
I'm gonna rip off 'I'm a Newb' on this one. These are lyrics to a recently written hardcore song. All mine!

(hardcore vocals)
Push the knife deep into my chest.
The blood is as warm as a summer day.
I loved you, but there is no reason for this.
Our love is shattered by your excuses.
Once loved you,
Now I think of you everyday.
You are my inspiration.
The inspiration of every creation.
God looked unto you for the mold of female.

(Emo-like)
Dreaming of you makes me sane.
I've written a thousand letters,
All of them were to you.
You've killed my heart again.
Thank you for all the pain.

(hardcore)
Pain, and suffering.
All caused by you.
I'd cover my body with your initials,
Just to feel you close to me once again.
Now I'm scarred, and I still love you.
Come back to me.
Come back to me.

Any suggestions?