Production/Arrangement: Excellent!
Instrumentation: Excellent!
Communication: ???

Its easy for me to criticize from the safety of my home, with none of my stuff 'out there' for people to take pot-shots at. And i will freely admit that you can play circles around me.

While the music is playing, I'm blown away, but afterwards, I have no idea what you were trying to tell me. I'm reminded of a certain obscure singer/piano player named Reginald Dwight, who only came to prominence after he teamed up with a lyricist named Bernie Taupin.

You have some amazing talent, schmange. I fear that if you "go the Yngwie route", too many will be denied the joy of hearing you.