Ok... I need some feedback from some honest to goodness real guitar players about some of the stuff I've been recording recently. Like in your face opinions that'll get my head straightend out on where I need to take things.
For instance, should I continue doing songs like the ones below, or move more into more 'guitar' tunes that show off playing styles etc. Or is it ok to do continue doing 'concept' tunes and gradually show off the guitar playing over a larger number of songs?

So far I've completed these ones:

http://members.rogers.com/schmange/GoinHome.192.mp3
http://members.rogers.com/schmange2/ByePremix.mp3

... and on the other end of the scale..moogboog and scary

http://www.mp3.com.au/artist.asp?id=8258

I just need to get some feedback on what ya think of the first coupla tunes and whether my strengths would lie in continuing with that kinda stuff or just go the yngwie route and do instrumental guitar tunes.












[Edited by schmange on 12-22-2002 at 02:14 PM]