I really like your song, William. Once you get it a little smoother you should definitely break that out on an open mic night or just hanging with friends or family. Feels like you can easily put together three or four verses and a good singalong chorus. What you've got so far made me smile and want to sing along.

Regards,

Dave...

P.S. I used the word should up there. Obviously you should do what you want to do.