this is my first song so dont be too hard on me but it was origanilly supposed to be rock but after i wrote it it didnt sound like rock to me
ANGER
My anger builds up fast
It happened more in the past
It makes me want to break stuff
Not hit my pillow with a fluff
I want you to die
Like when i eat pie
I want you to shutup
So why dont you shutup
I want to beat you down
I want to give you a pound
I want to hurt you bad
It cant be on a pad
I hate you so much
I gonna give you a punch
Im gonna kick you too
I want to beat you down
I want to give you a pound
I want to hurt you bad
It cant be on a pad

So tell me if its good. if it sounds like rock and tell me if you have any suggestions