I liked it, and yeah it had 80's overtones, but in my opinion 90's rock is way inferior, so there's nothing wrong with it! I liked the drum sounds, even tho I'm more into playing over electronic break beats myself or techno stuff. Your lead at the end was very fluid and enjoyable, it almost ended TOO soon.
I found your voice to be very nice to listen to (presuming it was you singing!) and the lyrics werent bad either. The main problem I had with it, was I just found it a little too empty and sparse to justify it's 6+ minutes in length, if you could cut the length down, or add some more guitar or keyboards to fill it out more it would sound better to my ears. I'd rate it a 7+ out of 10, mainly because I dont usually listen to the particular style of music, but for what it was, it was a well written and performed song (just needed a longer lead break, it's the highlight of a song, and to fade it out just as you started the tapping was cruel!)
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