"Dozens of people spontaneously combust each year, it's just not that widely reported".
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One thing I found was that the voice was a little too washed in reverb for me. I understood the effect you were going for, but I think that in generaly you tended to overdo the effects a little. Very Leonard Cohen in a way though. I need to listen to it a bit more for something a bit more useful.