I'm opening myself up to major critisism here, but this is my first song I've attemted on Cubase VST. Basically, it's a song about a guy going home from the war and his mental thoughts and journey along the way.
(also subtle references to the 9/11 event)

I did all the instruments myself & there's
still some work to do on the vocals etc... but wanted to get a few first impressions before I continue.
(like does it need harmonies on the last coupla verses??)

The main song is at:
http://members.rogers.com/schmange6/GoinHome.Inst17.mp3

... and there's a log of the recording process at:
http://www.itsmynewsletter.com/cgi-bin/itsmy/go.exe?page=48&domain=23&webdir=schmange

Any comments (good or bad) definitely welcome....
I'm about to start work on my next one so any help would be greatly appreciated.
TIA