In the same channel episode, I also like the riff you play at the start and end of the clip, and have tried to pick that up. It's a nice practice / warm-up routine for some rock basics like powerchords, 16th note rhythm and palm muting.
Any chance you could have a quick look over the attached transcription, and tell me if I got close to it? (Also, any pointers you have on the bits I missed at the end of the second bar and start of the fourth would be great).
There's no time signature - I just threw it all into a spreadsheet, and assume every cell represents a 16th. So hope it makes sense.
Many thanks,
Chris