Damn, that was HOT!!! Smoking man!! That's some great playing!

You were off the rails until you hit one clanger...and then you started playing it safe. Forget it...keep going!!! If you just kept going, honestly I may have notice, but I would not have cared. If I wasn't a guitar player, I wouldn't have noticed at all.

It was great...it's hard to come up with what you could do better. The ONLY thing I could suggest is try to add some drama. Start out slower, build up to a creshendo...make you audience WANT it...make them BEG for it, then give it to them, and then back off. Joe Bonamassa, who plays blues in the style you are, is a master of it.

Man I wish I could play like you :-).