Hey guys, i made these 2 videos of me messing around displaying my phrasing :) i would really like some feedback on what you think i could do better, and what im doing good. Keep in mind that there are some mistakes in there, it's improvised on the spot both videos :)

Please comment

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rQnhQ6RSb2U

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nqf1qr04HFU