Wrote this song in a 24 hr time span in a hurry to surprise my girlfriend for valentines day. So it's not well rehearsed, which means timing and vocals are a little rough. But hey it's the thought that counts right, so figured Id share a little vday surprise with you all.. Please tell me all tips to get better negative or positive I accept them both gladly, just want to improve overall. Here's the link http://m.youtube.com/watch?feature=c4-feed-u&v=APVbd9ex6mI