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johnnyasteroid
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johnnyasteroid
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Joined: 10/27/12
Posts: 3
12/02/2012 4:12 pm
HI everyone, I was unable to use download for some reason. I followed directions given but nadda. I did post lyrics instead within my post window. live in very small community 100 miles from no where. I have written full time for over 30 yrs. Was wondering what others think of my lyric? I only have third grade ed and am self taught. Is this how lyrics are structured or is it too poemee?
If anyone does like this Jamaican Serenade, I have lots of other songs and have versatle style. Would like someone to do demos (I only write lyrics and melody lines/cappela tapes)? In exchange we can sign a legal contract?
Thanks everyone and wish me luck trying to learn playing guitar-am almost 60 yrs old and have fat fingers that dont work as quick as the old noggin.