I've listened to the rhytmn. First thing I can say is that I can figure out the bass and the drums easily, that's a good sign. It means that your rhytmn is well build, well that's what I think.

I'm not into non-muted distortion chords but I can hear your style. I would be interested in hearing the song with bass and drums cause I beleive it has a great potential.

I think you got something great to build on, let me know when you got a version with bass and drums.

A bada** bass line on this track would be nasty :)