great stuff, man! i love the juxtaposition of heavy lyrical concepts with the tonally-simple accompaniment. you have a very good voice that didn't stray out of key at all, and you had a very controlled "slide" if you want to call it that, in your melody line. overall it was enjoyable, very listenable, and well-crafted.
"the more you know, the less you know. I don't feel like i know shit anymore, but i love it."
-Mike Stern
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