Hey Frank,
I thought it had a pretty cool feel, and nice leads too. Everything seemed to fit together, the keys seemed a little out of place though. I think it would sound just as good with drums, bass, and a rhythm, and lead guitar. The keys almost make it sound classic, and take away from the power chords on the guitar. Something heavier on the keys might work better, and add to the song more.

I like your stuff Frank, I've commented on some of it before. In this particular song, I just don't think you need the keys to pull it off.

JD