Ok.. This is me after about 2-1/2 months of playing. It's less than a minute. You will survive, I promise. :p Yes, there is a lot of suck factor. I know this. But, i'm ok with it for only play for 2-1/2 months. I only came up with this riff two nights ago and have had very little time to clean it up. But. I wanted to share it regardless.

Couple things

1) The recording is poor quality as well. I need to learn how to manipulate it better.
2) Timing could be better
3) Need better lead in from the opening slow sad sounding riff to the chunk section of the riff
4) Going from chunk section to where I move up the fretboard in that happy sounding rythm... Not sure I like that. Not sure if flows well with the theme of the riff.

http://cid-f1c667b529532c45.skydrive.live.com/self.aspx/Public/Need%20a%20name%20for%20this.mp3

Anyway, honesty is welcome, flames are not. :D