Light - I think your improv skills are better than you think, for me it took off at the 2nd verse, you seemed to let go a bit more, & you could have carried it into the outro.

The tone was nice too - clean but the sustain was good. Just back the level down a bit, especially where the BT goes quieter. I found myself straining to hear the backing to relate the lead to. I detected a bit of an intonation thing, sounded like the G string is a little out, could be my cloth ears though! :rolleyes:

There's a good take there, hope you finish & share, look forward to listening.