Thanks for the very rapid feedback! I did throw it together very quickly just using Audacity, I've made the changes you kindly suggested, it does sound way better except you can now hear the snarl-ups when I picked too aggressively...

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The chorus line is still a little too loud, but backing it off more loses it against the chords. Ah, well, it'll have to do...
Cheers for listening, and to Mpaq for the song.