Thanks WrigglerUk for listening and commenting on my take.
I have nothing but praises on your playing; everything is well done.
My only constructive criticism is not on your playing but on the production.
You have a theme that sounds good but when the next part comes in, the last note of the theme keeps ringing. You could fade out the theme take or Cross fade the tracks so they blend together.
Also, the theme track sounds a little louder compared to the other parts. Bring the level down (about -1.00) and see how you like it.
Really cool take my friend. :)