Hey Spedzar, just saw your post and had to check your take out. Really cool playing man, sure there are a few bum notes in there and a bit of cheese in places but it fits the bnacking perfectly and as you say the hook stays with you! Have it flying around my head at the moment, I actually thought the panned part was cool too and the strange little looped section before you come back in with the harmonised motif at the end. If you have the time I would love to hear those very minor bum notes fixed but then again they don't detract from it at all. Great speed runs in there too, has a very unusual flavour to it - I like it!

Won't be able to submit anything this month, have my college finals in two weeks - damn course I have to do at weekends as an (im)mature student. Look forward to hearing all of the takes.