Hey mpaq. Thanks for your comments. I’m glad you liked my take.

I’m kinda busy these days; so, I’m gonna listen to your takes and comment one by one. I hope you guys don’t mind.

WrigglerUk. You did a good job playing the bass, it really added rhythm and body to the track.
Your timing has improved a lot.
My only criticism is on something I have mentioned to you before, and that is… your bending technique. Always remember to bend the notes into the right pitch.

I don’t know what everybody else think about the effect you used, but I kinda like it. I’d use it at the very end and let it fade out, though.