Originally Posted by: light487
WrigglerUK - Yeh, I see what you mean about being in a rut there. It still sounded good though, don't get me wrong.. but I understand what you mean. Hopefully you will find some time during the month to work on it some more.

Well, I redid it, this time in one take with no attempt to add extra parts etc. Its more free-flowing, rougher and noisier, I did nothing with the EQ or noise gating. Interesting little stomp box effect over the last chorus though.
Still not great but I've had enough of it now! :p
Wriggleruk

BCN - I agree with Light, that was really good, love that tone. I happen to like the box you're in!
Light - Excellent. liked the recurring themes that weren't overused and use of the lower registers too. And super tone.
Mpaq - That was pretty good for a first take.
Good tone and I liked the way you panned the hook - simple but very effective. And some good variations in there too. I didn't care for the extravagant bends in the lead-in but thats a matter of taste only! Also you overwhelmed the BT in places. Playing-wise nowt wrong wi' it!