It was pretty good man. I liked it. It could be remixed maybe to bring the music up a bit, but that could just be my laptop speakers, who knows.

The only thing that actually bothered me was the "silver into gold" line. Just in my opinion, kinda cheesy. The rest of the lyrics were great though, honestly. Well sung. not many people have a voice that can be so prominent in a song and still sound good, so congrats I guess. :)