Originally Posted by: light487I wrote these silly lyrics last night, they just popped into my head but it was just a rhyming exercise.. so not really intending to use them or anything:
the sun is shining
the birds are singing
no time for snoring
the world is changing

the clock is ticking is another line that could go in there.. like I say.. it was just an exercise.. lol.. The 3rd line originally began as "the old man is snoring" taken straight from that nursery rhyme:
it's raining,it's pouring,
the old man is snoring.

but that didn't work.. so I went with:
there's no time for snoring

but then I needed to match up the syllables a bit more, so I chopped off the word "there's" and there it is.. That simple change of words creates a completely different context to the lyrics.. anyway.. as you can see I am not so good with lyrics just at the moment.. but I am working on that skill.

That's how it's done. You have to practice ryhming like practicing playing. The more you do the easier it becomes. Also, it the music is fast the words can linger on. That's what is called singing. :)

The sun is always shing and the birds are always singing. How about the moon is shining and your eyes are gleaming? Just a thought.

Glad to hear you are going to church. It's ashame a lot more aren't. I will get back to you later. I've been pretty busy too!

Think about what you want to do for a song theme, title, style, etc.

Merry CHRISTmas!