love your tone, as always. to me it always screams "restraint". this whole tune was far from flashy, and it sounded awesome. good stuff. the melody gets a little stale in some parts but thats simply because the backing instruments lack variation. i've heard alot of your finished stuff, so i'm sure you'll rev it up a bit. this tune sounds like it has a lot of room for unique ideas. pull out the synthesizer and get a little alternative wankage going on.