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jiujitsu_jesus
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jiujitsu_jesus
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06/07/2007 9:54 pm
Great job - excellent imagery, as always! Personally I'd replace "soothely" unless there's nothing else that contributes to the image and still fits the rhythm of the song, in which case I'd keep it. Nice one! :cool:
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