Originally Posted by: hunter60GREAT peice Jolly. I really like this version. I think the reader can really relate to Adam. I know I can anyway. Heck man, you know how I feel about your talent. I've been trying for 30 years to master something you seem to do with ease!

I just may have to throw myself in front of a bus.... ;)

In all seriousness, I like it. You done good.

Don't worry. It's not with ease that I do it, haha. The tedium would be unbearable except that I enjoy it.