shoot, i dont think my comment got posted. that sucks. i wrote like 3 paragraphs. hah.


well anyways, i definitely like it. the intro section was good; tone was a bit muddy and wasnt giving your fingers justice. ive been trying to get better tone from my recording equipment as of recently. i seem to be having that same problem, with the really ****ty tone that doesnt do anything for my lead playing but hamper it.

the intro progression sounded like a V/vi should have been thrown in there right before the lead kicks into the main verse.

verse tone is amazing and crisp. that was like night and day for me. beautiful phrasing, honestly. i like it. you sound like you've got the skills and the dynamics thing down well. very wonderful.