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jeffhx
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jeffhx
Disco Bandit
Joined: 12/20/05
Posts: 1,929
04/17/2007 5:50 am
little boy watches as the truck drives by
ice cream jingle tunes echoed through his eyes
he jumps up and about as tears rolled down his cheeks
but the truck disappeared yet again as he threw his dime

little boy's momma said it was alright
sang him a song she did and he was all fine
why mama do they keep passing by?
do they not know that it saddens this little boy?

soon she said one will drop by
and u can have all the different kinds to try
don't forget that there's many of you out there?

he sits all day thinking what to do
then he realises that he's just a fool
run amok goes the little birds
that makes his day

momma fell down, disappeared yesterday
and he felt like the world was mocking him
so he sang that song he knew forever that day
all day through the night

he is keen that soon one will drop by
then he'll have all the different things to try
he remembers that there's many others out there

little boy watches as the truck drives by
ice cream jingle tunes echoed through his eyes
he jumps up and about as tears rolled down his cheeks
but the truck disappeared yet again as he threw his dime

cheers,
josh

i need a title cant think of a good one..i actually like this one..havent been doing as much writing as i used to..this cud be the new song...hmm tell me what u think guys
[FONT=Impact]grooviest tunes ever [/FONT]