This is much improved over the previous version. I really like this track, great use of the riffs without any lead to start - I love music that gives riffs a chance to shine, makes the solos all the more impressive.

The song structure is well thought out so far and I like the way the arpeggiated sequence follows the riff to open the lead section (I use this technique a lot too - works very well to open a more off the wall passage) - I can see that phrase being the signature hook for the song.

As always, great playing and technique - keep me posted on your progress with this one. Also I have to say, it's good to see you making a departure from the Satch sound, this sounds a little more unique - neoclassical over an up tempo Satch-style backing, you don't hear that too often! :)