One. Good work. Love it for sure.

Two. I love how the them of how impersonal abortion and technology ties together.

Three.

The night was warm and moist, and a smooth rainsmell lingered on the air. No one saw this. Suburban silence, all distant cars and cricketcalls, hushed through the sprawling neighborhoods of the town. Breathing a tired sigh, the soft hum of tires and concrete wound out from the highway and through the community—softwhispering through white houses. Warm and soft Virginia June

Hit me in the heart. Almost made me wish that I didn't have such disdain for the Norhtern Virginia economy and could live there. I can taste how it feels almost, you know what I mean... when you read some description of scenery and you just feel like it creeps up in some odd senses beyond sight.

Four. I loved the paragraph with the "now" speech from the boss. I guess that also ties in with how impersonal everything is. Same with the doors. Bahg I love it darling.

Five. I can't wait to see the rest of it.