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z0s0_jp
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z0s0_jp
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04/03/2007 12:21 am
Originally Posted by: earthman buck The character is easier to relate to than in your other stories


Hhmmmmm....I related to the the creepy museum guy more. :D
Good job with the imagery....did you have difficulty beginning with "the night was...", I believe Billy Crystal tried to start a story with "the night was moist"
in "Throw Momma from the Train" it did not work for him but somehow you got away with it. ;)
"Dammit Jim!! I'm a guitarist not a roadie...so haul my gear"