Hey Jolly - I was wondering where you've been. Glad to see you back 'round. Read your piece. I like it. It's different for you, right? Not so heavy on the symbolism this time. Nice description. Several in there that I especially like, for example: "Breathing a tired sigh, the soft hum of tires and concrete wound out from the highway and through the community—softwhispering through white houses." Nice.

I was caught right in the heart with 'The past is over-rated'. Perfectly stated.

You know how I feel about your skills. Amazing.

Looking forward to the re-write.

H60