For about the first 50 seconds you sounded kind of out of tune and key, resulting in your chords sounding gross; but around 50 seconds or so when the "refrain" of the song comes around I really liked how the little riff you played there sounded(it's the same one that you play during the outro)
I do realize it's tough to play lead on an acoustic, but nonetheless some of your notes sounded really sticatto(spelling?), so whenever your electric comes I'd recommend playing that same lead on clean electric that way the notes can ring a little bit more; You've definitely got a cool idea going on there but I think it neats some more work before it's dubbed as finished;
