Originally Posted by: aschlemanShe steals Gravity from the Earth
I can't help but fall right into her...[/QUOTE]
I think the second line is good, but the first one isn't. I understand that it's sort of necessary in order for the second one to make sense, but I think it sounds too nerdy or something. You might want to reword that.

[QUOTE=aschleman]From a distance to near miss
Targets too small I cannot hit
From an instance to so long
Lights are off, I left them on.
It's heavy when she wants it all
It's gravity, it's not my fault.

I just plain like this. Especially the last two lines.