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aschleman
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aschleman
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01/24/2007 4:30 pm
I can't stop.... I've been in nonstop writer mode the past 3 days... A John Mayer'ish song I started last night...I figured I'd post it here rather than fill up the threads with my lousy songs.

I moved into a new place today
I was suppose to do it yesterday
The white walls scream for color
In the front yard, a four leaf clover***
I've got boxes up to my knees
and I've only got one set of keys
Well it's my first Monday
So far from my Friday
and you
It's my first Monday
starting brand new
and everything feels right this time
If I can remember where I packed my mind.
My new Monday
So far from Friday
and you
I moved into a new place today
I was suppose to do it yesterday
The carpet's clean for the time.
and the kitchen smells like pine.
I can't find most things, Where's my phone
Right now my house is anything but a home.
Cuz it's my first Monday
and it's so far from Friday
and you
It's my first Monday
I'm gonna start brand new
But it just doesn't feel right this time
I can't remember where I left my mind
On this Monday
So far from Friday
I'm thinking of you.
I moved into a new place today
I was suppose to do it yesterday



***haha... I had a line here that was "the bathroom's sans odor" but it really took away from the serious emotional value of the song... haha. i liked it though so i figured I'd share it.