Hey sheepy,
I usually check your stuff because you are a talented guitarist but I always think the same thing. The music is cool but the singer just doesnt do it for me which is a shame because it kind of detracts from the overall listening experience. It's like he is always a shade under the correct note, a little off key... The mix on the instruments is very good and the band is tight but the vocals are far too loud in the mix IMO. The singer wasn't the engineer by any chance??!!! :D Nice solo in the middle and I really like the fusion of electronica and rock. BTW, not being hard on you just giving constructive criticism because you asked. If you had a different singer with a different style you could stand a genuine chance of getting noticed by a label.