You already know how impressed I am by your talent and this story just cements that thought. I have to admit I had to read it through several times and I am not sure I picked up everything in it but it still wowed me. Your writing is very dense and compact. Terrific (horrid and beautiful at the same time) images throughout.
We have different styles but I can certainly appreciate someone who can write in post-modern style with such ease. That's a real gift you've got there.
Like I said before, Thomas is a bitter and twisted man. At least that's how I saw him. Nicely drawn character.
Let us know where it will be published. If it were mine, I would send it outside of the school literary magazine. Get your submissions started now. Let us know where they are going to publish so all of your GT buds can go out and buy a copy.
Just so you know, I want an autograph! :D
[FONT=Tahoma]"All I can do is be me ... whoever that is". Bob Dylan [/FONT]
