Originally Posted by: acapellaPretty cool. I see some parallels with the short story "On a Wim". Are you perhaps a Michael Chikousky enthusiast? Well you certainly pulled inspiration from the right place. :)

I really do like the story though. Nothing else to say really, except...good on ya. And you are a genius of literature.

Actually, the influence and inspiration and style of the third section are all derived from Beckett.