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iiholly
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iiholly
hmm
Joined: 07/29/02
Posts: 2,368
01/26/2007 1:44 am
Reminds me of a short story... well a short story in a short story I read for english today. A mom becomes a junkie so she can hang out with her junkie son. Then the son cleans up and the mom is still a junkie. But yeah... you could add some depth to it with more adjective, varied sentence structure, and what not. Good plot though.