Originally Posted by: Jolly McJollysonI didn't hate him that much either. We all knew the narrator hated him, but he wasn't but so unbearable. Be careful not to make him a caricature, though.[/QUOTE]

Yeah, well what you're saying ties in with my point, that the narrator hated him and that the goal is for you to appreciate that, which I guess you do...whether or not I can actually make you feel the same way, I'm not sure, this my second story after all. But I'll be working with some ideas. As far as making him a caricature, I mean, again, this is from the perspective of one person who sees him a certain way and, you know, has some issues. The way he sees him may be "caricatureish" but still...that's how he sees him. I dunno, do you think it's overdone, or just done wrong, or what? Suggestions for making the reader share the narrator's emotion?

[QUOTE=hunter60]Somewhere up^ there someone said that it's like a couple. Perfect example.