Originally Posted by: lyricchicFor a moment both she and I both stood
That was the only thing that really jarred me. I don't think you need to say both twice.
Other than that, it was pretty good. There were a lot of phrases in there I liked.
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That was the only thing that really jarred me. I don't think you need to say both twice.
Other than that, it was pretty good. There were a lot of phrases in there I liked.
