Originally Posted by: Jolly McJollysonAh ok, I see. Maybe it's the setting?

Well actually that could have a lot to do with it. I hadn't really thought of it, but the last story pretty much took place in one room of a building with a person sitting in one place, whereas the new one was in a couple of places, and with a lot of other people, and movement...it had more room for actual events to occur, and less for memories and thought-dialogue or to dwell on certain objects or symbols...so more had to happen...so it would have to be more chronologically linear and practical...do you think I'm getting this right?