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Jolly McJollyson
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Jolly McJollyson
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Joined: 09/07/03
Posts: 5,457
11/24/2006 9:48 pm
Originally Posted by: earthman buckHahaha. I know how that is. When I wrote it, I spent like 20 minutes pondering whether it made sense or not. Eventually I just figured 'Ah, what the hell, dare to be different' and here we are now.

Nono, it makes sense, it's gramatically sound. "It was footsteps" is just too...I dunno. I think "Footsteps" would really improve it...that "It was" just sounds so clunky.
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