Originally Posted by: Jolly McJollysonI mean, take "Vanessa de Mille," for example. Her name seemed just too obvious a play on the Venus de Milo, it made the whole passage seem cheesy or campy, so I shortened it to simply "Vanessa." The Venessa/Venus parallel is still there, but without the redundant "de Mille."
That's a good idea. I had thought before that Vanessa de Mille was too obvious and unrealistic, but not enough to point it out. I'm glad you changed that.
You go outside and practice screaming. We'll play music while you're gone.