BLAM! I enjoyed it! Can't explain the turnaround, but hey....
I do think there's still some validity to my original reading - to put it in guitar terms, your technique is unquestionably good, but whether your use of it ends up detracting from the music - maybe you're the only one who can answer that. It's probably also dependant on audience.
Are you studying literature at the moment?
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