Originally Posted by: Tonja_ReneeWow Jolly, I really enjoyed that... I'm glad I waited though until I got home and could spend some time reading it without interruption.

Definitely awoke the voyeur within me. Although Thomas/Tommis seemed a bit pompous for my liking. I definitely found myself getting into the story and wondering about his motives..

Great job Jolly.. If you write anymore about this character, I would love to read it.

Thanks a lot, Tonja! However, could you point out an example of Thomas's pompousness? The curators' and academics' words on "art" at the beginning were meant to be the most blatant examples, and I'm concerned that Thomas's private arrogance played through so strongly to you without those overshadowing it.