I'm not gonna lie to you, I didn't understand a lot of that. Perhaps I would if I was reading it from a book whilst in my room or something, but reading computer-screen text is difficult for me. Basically, I had no idea what was happening throughout that whole story.
But I will say this: you are a genius of words. Even though my small vocabulary did not allow for a full understanding of what you had written, I liked the way the words rolled off my mind's tongue as I read them.
Bravo, my pet.